Inspiration for our new idea

We spent a long time as a group watching others AS main tasks and taking notes and getting ideas about camera shot/angles, music, and use of editing. After sharing our new idea managed to come up with quite a few different ideas.
We decided that we wanted to have a shower scene, our plan was very similar to the plan in the first 50, hoever with a frew slight changfes, we wanted to have a variety of different shots.

Plan for our task...

* Faid from black to the moving image (diagetic music covering)of Man opening the door and walking through it (long establishing show of man,showing whole body).
* Man looking around room , standing in same position as he starts taking his jacket off and removing tie.
* While still removing jacket and tie moves towards camera and takes a box out of his pocket and chucks the tie and jacket on the chair.
* He looks towards the camera with a blured image with camera still focused on his face, with ring box in his hand.
* Then the camrera focused on blured image (which is a broken glass) and his face is out of focus, his hand then moves into the focused part of the moving image and he places the ring box.
*He then walks towards a door which is near the end of the rook (camrea follows him and becomes an over the shoulder shot)
*He pushes door open and shower noise starts to take over the diagetic sound (classical/ soft music) and he comes across his partener sitting in a running shower fully clothed with make up down her face (camera establishing her and moving closer to her) 
* Camera zooms out he joins her sitting in the shower, she rests her head on his shoulder and shuts her eyes.
*(use of flash backs) faids into black as camera goes closer to her face, then goes clack and faid into blurred, very quick moving images (backing music heartbeating) 4 flashbacks faiding into eachother;
1. Hooded man entering room
2. Man moving towards woman and woman throwing/ dropping glass
3. Man attacking woman
4. Woman falling into shower
* Faids out and title appears